Kantayra ([info]kantayra) wrote,

And 'drabble' number five slowly trickles in...

And, by 'drabble', I mean 1900 word ficlet. o.O See? I wasn't kidding when I said it was going on forever!

[info]sarcasticbitca wanted V/L and snark. Except...dear gods! She didn't warn me! Once you set these two off against each other, they will not shut up! And, even worse, this is set sometime soon after 1x02 and I was trying to keep it in canon, so they couldn't even rip off each other's clothes and fuck like rabid weasels the way they obviously wanted to! In fact, if I had to summarize this fic, it would go thus:

This is the snark that never ends. Yes, it goes on and on, my friend. Veronica and Logan started snarking, not knowing what it was, and they'll continue snarking forever just because… This is the snark that never ends, etc., etc.

~_^ So, yeah. The world's longest 'drabble'. And be gentle on me; it's my first VM fic. :P

This fic has now moved here.

Whew. That got...yeah, out of control. :P But, hey, snark's good for the soul. And, yeah, the last two drabbles probably won't get out until tomorrow. They are still coming, though.

Also, I greatly appreciate how inappropriate my icon is to this fic. It's the only VM one I have, though. :P
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[info]uncfaery

June 30 2005, 20:58:57 UTC 6 years ago

you wrote Veronica Mars fic!

that just totally made my day...and it was V/L fic...yayness!

it was lovely, just perfect, by the way

[info]amontillado

June 30 2005, 21:58:26 UTC 6 years ago


Yay! You wrote VM fic! And you should do it more often, too. That was perfectly snarky and wonderful, and most of all fun. Not too many of those in the VM fic department.

Would twenty bucks and a lap dance be enough to persuade you to write more V/L in the near future?

[info]syderia

June 30 2005, 23:21:57 UTC 6 years ago

I was laughing all the way through it.

[info]maybedarkpink

June 30 2005, 23:57:01 UTC 6 years ago

Hee! Very impressive, especially for your first VMars fic. I love your snarky Veronica/Logan... very in canon and very much what I needed after seeing too many "OMG! Logan is such a wounded woobie! He's just going to cry until Veronica kisses him!" fics.

[info]blue_icy_rose

July 1 2005, 01:46:44 UTC 6 years ago

I think I kind of love you. This was just perfect...you've got the snarkiness that is Logan and Veronica down. You'd never know it was your first VM fic.

You've just inspired me to go write the rest of the Logan chapter of my fic. Which means, I'm going to give you a big ass cookie since I was considering putting it off to tomorrow. *holds out cookie*

[info]deathisyourart

July 1 2005, 05:59:23 UTC 6 years ago

So... where is the rest of it?

Come on! I know you have a few more chapters buried away on that computer of yours. Hand them over!

It does feel like your first VM fic, BTW. though this: “Don’t tell me you want to be worst enemies with someone else? Because I don’t think I could take that.” kind of sounds funny. I had to stop and get over the use of the word "worst" there.

[info]enigmaticblues

July 1 2005, 07:57:21 UTC 6 years ago

Spot on snark. I love it.

[info]lovinspike247

July 1 2005, 08:36:24 UTC 6 years ago

Loved it, and I don't even watch Veronica Mars! And before you kill me for not watching VM, my excuse is that it hasn't started in the UK yet.

Ah...you gotta love snarkiness!

[info]deathisyourart

July 1 2005, 09:08:58 UTC 6 years ago

Do you have cable modem? Or are you an extremely patient dial up person?

Pssstt there are other ways of watching a show that don't involve the television (out-dated piece of crap that it is). If you want to see VM before it starts in the U.K. then drop me an e-mail at death_is_your_art@yahoo.ca

[info]sarcasticbitca

July 1 2005, 13:32:40 UTC 6 years ago

LMAO

WOW! You just totally made my weekend! Thank you so much for writing this, you did an amazing job! And the snark that never ends...I love how they just kept playing off of one another *dies laughing again*

You really have a knack for perfect early S1 V/L dialogue. And Veronica's sarcastic VO's and humor. And Logan's jerkiness. And the fact that they actually were flirting like third-graders...Actually, everything about it was perfect! You should soooo write more VM fic.

[info]sadiekate

July 4 2005, 21:59:28 UTC 6 years ago

I love the snark! So good!

[info]viciouswishes

July 5 2005, 16:10:48 UTC 6 years ago

That was just wonderful and snarky.

[info]bluebear_74

July 6 2005, 00:43:12 UTC 6 years ago

*giggles* This is great! Oh I bet she is looking forward to the trip back.

[info]_jems_

July 15 2005, 06:06:11 UTC 6 years ago

Just found this, and I'm blown away by the snark. It's truly a wonder. Hope to see more VM fic from you in the future.

[info]amaliak

July 22 2005, 07:09:30 UTC 6 years ago

wow.
we just keep running into each other, don't we? *laughs*

you're so right. this is a total snark fest. and I love it. It just seems to roll out of LoVe so easily. *sigh* All that's missing is the hot monkey sex.
LoVe is Sarkney. Oh yes.

Great job. *places in memories*
cheers.
--Lex

[info]filmobsessed137

July 23 2005, 04:10:44 UTC 6 years ago

Oh, that kicked so very much ass...

[info]flippedstargirl

July 31 2005, 07:15:24 UTC 6 years ago

Hello lovah. I thought I'd check out the journal of the person I was going to "merry." lol.

Dude, this rocks. I love, love, love the way you write their snark.
Guh. Seriously, you did an awesome job. And I loved Logan turning red when he was caught flirting with Veronica, and Veronica admitting that he was.

Hee. I love this part:

“We all make mistakes. Now, who was it that told me that? Oh, right. Duncan.”

“That’s okay.” She patted him on the shoulder reassuringly. “You’ll get over him. And I’m sure one day you’ll find someone who can appreciate you for the complete and utter jerk you really are.”

Oh and I hope you write more VM fic. I'd love it if you did an "on the way back" sequel to this. I totally see it being awkward at first, then they snark, and then they rip each other's clothes off and have sex... it's worth a try right? But it doesn't have to be a sequel to this... anything that involves Veronica, Logan and snark is good. ;)

[info]flippedstargirl

July 31 2005, 07:16:55 UTC 6 years ago

Oh and I'm going to friend you. :)

[info]dsy

September 13 2005, 20:40:26 UTC 6 years ago

Oh my... First time I actually read the whole fanfic thing through. I love the way you've let them be themselves and wow... was that well thought out. Really interesting and enjoyable! I'd defenetly read more.... Good job!

[info]queen_haq

April 18 2006, 23:19:15 UTC 6 years ago

This comment is almost a year old but I figure better late than never. I FUCKING LOVE this fic. Your characterisation is perfect and I can visualize the fic in my head. I love, love, love the dialogue. Gah, I miss the fun snarky, bantery L/V from canon and this fic completely reminds me of them from back then.

[info]star_material

April 19 2006, 19:21:11 UTC 6 years ago

Oh man, that was AMAZING. I love, love, loved it - like whoa! I am now going to go read all of your fic while I pretend to work and I'm totally friending you. Please let me know if that's not cool.

(I will warn you that I'm a lurker by nature; I try to update and comment, but let's be serious, I'm here for the fic! So if you want to, you can friend back, but I won't be offended if you don't.)

In conclusion? I really liked this. You've so impressed me with this one fic (your first!) to make you a "must read immediately" friend. And I know that this comment is hella late, but that's actually awesome, because I have a backlog of fic! Yay!

Thanks and have a great day!! [/end of overlong and gushy rambling]

[info]skybound2

May 3 2006, 15:47:08 UTC 6 years ago

Ahh, old-school snarking Veronica and Logan. Is there anything better?

This line was a little stroke of genius: “Don’t look now, but your ambiguous sexuality is showing.”

Anonymous

July 19 2006, 19:52:14 UTC 5 years ago

amazing. you captured the humor exactly.

[info]earth2mars

December 20 2006, 05:20:47 UTC 5 years ago

Wow--that dialogue was so "fast" my head is still spinning. You rocked the snarkiness--yes, you did. :) Such accurate characterization--loved that. So many hilarious lines, but this was one of my favs: “Guess I’ve heard right; those lips never do close, do they?”
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